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Pretty in Pink

Pretty in Pink

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PostSubject: The Land of Lost hope   The Land of Lost hope Icon_minitimeFri Mar 16, 2007 1:07 am

The Land of Lost hope


In the huge land of lost hope
where no one dares defy depression
everyone quietly takes his own seat
for they couldn't reach desired perfection

I hurry.. march quickly to that place
wishing to find myself an empty spot
to swim into solitude and cry endlessly
over all of the valuable hope I forgot

I start to look around me and gaze
in the pitch-dark of the ghastly gloom
Distant faint figures lingering obliviously
as if each is awaiting his doom

For many days, I peacefully stay there
watching those sad figures all around
the sun never rose here at all
and darkness is all what I found

Why am I still staying in that nasty place?
I think that this is not where I should be
maybe I can go out and discover the world
where I thought there was no space for me
No
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General/Tantawi



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Age : 29
Registration date : 2007-02-26

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PostSubject: Re: The Land of Lost hope   The Land of Lost hope Icon_minitimeFri Mar 16, 2007 2:31 am

Nothing to say..It's a great honor to get a reply from such a talented person like you.. MARVELOUS poem..


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Pretty in Pink

Pretty in Pink

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PostSubject: thnx   The Land of Lost hope Icon_minitimeFri Mar 16, 2007 2:34 am

Thnx a lot Embarassed I'm the one who's honored!
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bestgogo

bestgogo

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Age : 28
Registration date : 2007-03-16

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PostSubject: Re: The Land of Lost hope   The Land of Lost hope Icon_minitimeFri Mar 16, 2007 2:40 am

great poem i liked it alot bas feha ka2aba keteer , anyway i really liked it Smile
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