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General/Tantawi




Number of posts : 55
Age : 34
Registration date : 2007-02-26

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PostSubject: A new angel in the sky..   A new angel in the sky.. Icon_minitimeMon Mar 19, 2007 3:42 pm

Today I sit in my room, in that place I call home
I've been here for so many years
But I never knew one day. I could be alone
At my last visit to you. I found angels guarding your grave


We met so long ago, since that time youre my best friend
I remember every second uptil the end
I remember that day, death visited our home
I talked with death alot, but he just did say
Your not qualified for the job that for it I came


He took your soul up to the sky
Riding the wind, fast, he did fly
Now I got the message
God wanted you upthere
Because of the leakage
Leakage in angels..


S h e r i f T a n t a w i®
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Banhawy

Banhawy


Number of posts : 118
Age : 33
Registration date : 2007-03-02

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PostSubject: Re: A new angel in the sky..   A new angel in the sky.. Icon_minitimeMon Mar 19, 2007 8:47 pm

another gr8 poem...thnx sherif for this beautiful poetry
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Number of posts : 20
Registration date : 2007-03-19

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PostSubject: Re: A new angel in the sky..   A new angel in the sky.. Icon_minitimeThu Mar 22, 2007 10:14 am

Soooooo toutching Tantawy. I read the first one and I cried my heart out. This one too got tears in my eyes. Lets all pray for her any specially you tantawy because:


إذا مات العبد إنقطع عمله إلا من ثلاث : منها : ولد صالح يدعو له

and Ihtink you're "waladon saleh"
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Pretty in Pink

Pretty in Pink


Number of posts : 121
Age : 32
Registration date : 2007-03-10

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PostSubject: Re: A new angel in the sky..   A new angel in the sky.. Icon_minitimeThu Mar 22, 2007 4:09 pm

Tantawy... speechless about the poem... all I could say is that I loved the last sentence :"leakage of angels"... also use those great images to bring life to your poetry..
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